Open Poetry #35 |
Watching on the sill.... |
gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Agate you have won me sunshine, captured in the glitter of your insides In moonlight we have washed you clean to die another day for me in cancerous rays ...polished... there could be no cold in the heart of your dimensions for you are I and I am you Agate upon the sill you have won me back, from cloudless to bathe amongst them and float. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This shines upon the sill so perfectly Gemma! Outstanding. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So perfectly and delicately beautiful!! So good to read you. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
sheer grace. an elegant write that captures the mood perfectly |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh and i am going to have to agree with "the Raph" Magnificent Gemma girl and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gemma, you write beyond your years ~ both in content and in form! You have, and are, something very special. Hugs with love, Linda |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
*smile* twofer. You make for one beautiful sill sitter. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
a Gem of sparkling proportions ... . . . priceless! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I agree with all the above..lovely writing M |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautifully done, dear Gem.. and nice picture, too. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh gemma love this and your pic |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Lovely... Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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