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It's quiet now.
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It's quiet now. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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It's quiet now. So quiet, even the crickets are sleeping. This, is the pensive time, the pondering time, when shadows of moonlight play over hills and valleys, and blind men read signs with fingertips touching warm... it's quiet now. Breathing comes to one, the fine hairs on the nape of one's neck feels the air of longing, and it is easy enough to turn in. But the moon pulls...it wakes one and brings them to the window to peer up...and in clear skies, it is a magnificence unto itself. Only a lover would see the light then, cast down upon the one standing at the window... and perhaps can even sense the deep soul sound of song as it trembles the body... a quiet come home would suffice... it's quiet now, but the moon may soon hear another song, and climb a little higher into the heavens. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
it's quiet now, but the moon may soon hear another song, and climb a little higher into the heavens. ======================= he surely will if he reads this.... youve written a sky sigh.  lovely lovely lovely.... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
ya done writ a good 'un... like it much. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I'm glad I came back and read this wonderful poem. |
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netsky Member
since 2005-03-29
Posts 148Miami |
Oh this is a wonderful poem. So refreshing and clean. I get tired of my own cleverness. I like to read -real poetry-. Yours here is -it- beautiful, sensitive. Every word there fits a thought you alone bring to me. thank you reid |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
something windows how they are the entry to new worlds enjoyed you here ms |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
And the song does arrive, doesn't it? One of them found its way here just now. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
a sigh waiting to happen here lady..  I really want to care, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
a quiet come home would suffice... Oh, lady... this is lovely. *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my how did I miss this lovely.. so gently penned..excellent! ~Hugs YOU!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
sighh, this is bootiful Kari  Mxx and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I know that quiet and those moonbeams. Such a calm and delightful bit of writing, dear lady. I loved this! hugs, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I meant to say something to this one earlier but other things came up a wondrful piece |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Beautiful, excellent poetry.... I can relate to this one in many parts, if not all......I am moved by it.... Thank you ----------ice/ford ><> |
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freewheelin Member
since 2005-04-09
Posts 53 |
its a great poem. when u can feel the poem and not read it, youd know theres something else to it. this is pretty much what youve done. well done. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sighing, once, twice...thrice... Beautiful images you have painted. Thanx Sun, for such tranquility. |
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