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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-04-05 09:21 AM

*
I step into myself each night,

that other one, always pretending

there you are

leaning against the headboard

waiting, watching.

*
Moonlight playing the shadows

tuning us into one another,

the move towards you

sparking the night.

Each embrace speaking volumes

of unsaid emotions.

*
To feel beautiful...just because,

To feel ageless, armed by you,

To be lost in the freeze of eyes,

knowing they see deeply

and raid my heart.

*
I double space these lines

leaving you...the in between.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-04-05 09:31 AM

ohhhh M, I love this one, and I love that new pic of you hon. Such a beautiful smile you have! Hugs.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-04-05 09:59 AM

You really are moving into a purple patch of writing

Excellent stuff

Dave

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

3 posted 2005-04-06 05:45 AM

very nice...but deep and descriptive..enjoyed this M..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2005-04-06 09:28 AM

This is beautiful M!

The inbetween...understood.

Love the new picture!!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2005-04-06 09:47 AM

Maureen this is just lovely ... like your smile in your pic! hugs, Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2005-04-06 10:24 AM

I was totally enraptured... this is lovely!!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2005-04-06 11:16 AM

loved this....

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2005-04-06 11:20 AM

Soft and sensual.An enjoyable read, Maureen!

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