The Painting (A Haiku poem) repost

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The Painting (A Haiku poem) repost

sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

0 posted 2005-04-01 08:32 AM

Colors of anger
A masterpiece created
Paint with angry strokes

Shades of gray, black, red
The story of a man's life
Tells of great sorrow

With unrestrained strength
Measureless beauty appears
His story unfolds

The anger now gone
His true soul shows a garden
Masterpiece finished

Posted this in the pub a couple years ago..Wanted to see the reception here

~~SCG~~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-04-01 09:01 AM

Very nicely writtten and much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

2 posted 2005-04-01 10:14 AM

"With unrestrained strength
Measureless beauty appears
His story unfolds"

Lovely, thought filled read. Enjoyed.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

3 posted 2005-04-01 08:33 PM

thanks for reposting

I missed it the first time

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2005-04-02 12:17 PM

And this write...is reminding me
of my favorite artist,
though not in grey tones.

When I see van Gogh, I do not see
just anger and frustration, though they are vibrant and visible
I see more clearly
in the boldest intensity
LOVE

a real connection
to the most basic vital signs of humanity

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

5 posted 2005-04-02 05:05 PM

Thanks everyone for the replies. I think I only got 2 last time..hey..I did twice as good! Lol.

Thanks again,

~~SCG~~

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