Open Poetry #35 |
Pale Shadows Walk Upon The Moon |
icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Coo-coo cried the morning dove, awareness struggling to rise, I pushed away the broken dreams, and lies, and forced my tired eyes to clear knowing there was no guiding light for me, no true star upon which I could steer. My hands still shaking from dark deeds of night, there was no refuge for the likes of me in sight, no warm hearth waiting on a distant shore, no mystic savior would appear. Purple owls had hurled me through the door, my morning rose without a plan where I had not needed one before; I knew once again I had to understand just simply what it was I was living for. Pale shadows called to me; in my heart I still knew that I was free to go in search of shelter anywhere, and I knew just as well once more both Heaven and Hell would always wait for me, and so without another word to say coo-coo cried the morning dove; I wrapped my soul in paper left from yesterday, knowing since I had no choice to play all I could do was turn and walk away. ©2005 by icebox |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox...forgive me replying with an old poem of mine Moon Shadows where churning is cloistered prisms spirals down into silver eyes through her streets a glow with sand tinted steep slide her cold fire reaps the quiet crackle of somnolence |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
icebox...Totally enjoyed the realness of your words. Loved the line " both Heaven and Hell would always wait for me" Thanks for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I wrapped my soul in paper left from yesterday, knowing since I had no choice to play all I could do was turn and walk away" *kiss* "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
icebox Does it really matter. A voyage is a voyage. Excellent write. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"I knew once again I had to understand just simply what it was I was living for.... I wrapped my soul in paper left from yesterday,..." Powerful write! Greatly enjoyed! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gotta agree with Sy here |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
I wrapped my soul in paper left from yesterday, knowing since I had no choice to play all I could do was turn and walk away. well done, icebox...certainly a powerful ending...a heartfelt write |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
what susan said, except a firm manly handshake instead. go bears |
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