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Open Poetry #35

Altered Travel

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2005-03-31 11:36 PM

Altered Travel

before
you have laid your head
on threads of pine
now they just blow
in the tender breeze
and playing in that wind
birds are natural chimes
I hear them in the distance
chatting to my mind
where there is a time
that can stand still
it is in the path of changing
and you find you can stay

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

1 posted 2005-04-01 12:09 PM

wonderful.

and playing in that wind
birds are natural chimes

so damn obvious but i have never heard or read anything similar - and not to toot my horn too much but I am pretty well read for my age.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2005-04-01 02:17 AM

I am hearing wind chimes, feeling a gentle breeze. Nicely done!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-04-01 08:34 PM

lovely scene

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2013-07-22 11:49 PM

And now she is one with the wind that chimes...
I'm running with that thought and will always remember her when.....

I wish I had told her how special she was.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2013-07-23 12:05 PM

She touched so many of us....and i will never forget her.

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