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Open Poetry #35

Verdant Longings

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2005-03-31 04:43 PM

Some rains wash deeper
than the flesh.

As if our bones cried out in
thirst.

And every drop fell holy to
their need.

Leaving only verdant longings
in their wake.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-03-31 04:57 PM

Verde - green...

I do love the color green...

makes for a soft landing, too.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-03-31 05:53 PM

Lovely Eric...well done.
Hugs~N

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2005-03-31 07:41 PM

Some rains do wash deeper than the flesh.
Thank you for writing this Eric.
TD

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-04-01 02:24 AM

Nice writing...James

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

5 posted 2005-04-01 02:45 AM

This I find, touch me in a good way; I want to thank you for writing this!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2005-04-01 07:16 AM

this reminded me of....
"Unremembered and afar, I watched you as I watched a star; From darkness,struggling into view..and loved you better than you knew."
---Dante Gabriel Rossetti

inspiring

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2005-04-01 08:31 PM

awesome

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2005-04-02 12:53 PM

I am never disappointed - *sigh*

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2005-04-02 01:04 PM

very nice work here ericc

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