Open Poetry #35 |
Urchin |
Jessie Carstein Junior Member
since 2004-01-08
Posts 41 |
He stands on the street corner, The filtered cancer in his teeth, Watching the buzz of speeding traffic, Holding a bagged greenhouse tightly. His eyes dance across the shifting scene, A noisy concerto rings in his ears, Flashing lights illuminate and hide him, The art of survival on the street. A whistling man walks into an alleyway, Turns and flicks his head askew, The innocent follows in his footsteps Into darkness and silence of the void. An explosion rings inside his head, A silver comet skewers his chest, Fire flares through the red tunnels, Eyes blackened by the raging inferno. He is a fallen child of the street, Lost in the purgatory of the slums, The lush green package slips from his hand And he flails from the edge of life itself. Will anyone scratch his name on a grave? Mourn the fallen child of the scrapheap? While we enjoy our stinking riches A child’s life is smothered by the concrete. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"The filtered cancer in his teeth" ~ creative way of referring to a cigarette. You gave a very vivid description of "survival on the street". It is tragic the number of young souls that are lost out there in the concrete jungle. Powerfully moving. EA |
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Jessie Carstein Junior Member
since 2004-01-08
Posts 41 |
This was inspired by a recent journey to 'Rio De Janeiro' where I saw many street kids either being severely beaten or being encouraged to kill each other in a ritual claled 'funk balls'. Disgusting that in such an age we have this kind of scenario in our midst. |
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Dautz Write Member
since 2004-11-16
Posts 96 |
Found much power behind your pen. " He is a fallen child of the street, Lost in the purgatory of the slums, The lush green package slips from his hand And he flails from the edge of life itself. Will anyone scratch his name on a grave? Mourn the fallen child of the scrapheap? While we enjoy our stinking riches A child’s life is smothered by the concrete" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Vivid imagery here, wish it were just some Hollywood fantasy. You have cried a Why? for many urchins with this write |
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