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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2005-03-30 01:39 AM

Awakening To The Realisations

They had only been in dreams
As I awakened to realisations
They disappear without trace
To those nowhere destinations

Only to be left broken hearted
As the loving glow disappears
Awakening to aches of reality
Revealed by my morning tears

My heart shall continue aching
As I always wanted to hold on
Silently sobbing into my pillow
I realise my dreams have gone

The truth was hurting me more
As I have to accept the reality
They used to call out my name
I have been forgotten obviously

Hope©2005

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

1 posted 2005-03-30 01:43 AM

I can feel the pain in this one. I'm been hurt many atimes in my young life it never seems to get easier

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2005-03-30 01:52 AM

NICe writing....I can feel it...James

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2005-03-30 02:29 AM

They had only been in dreams
As I awakened to realisations
They disappear without trace
To those nowhere destinations

The reality of it all really bites!!!
Hugs, Hope~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-03-30 07:31 AM

may you have dreams again once more

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2005-03-30 07:33 AM

My heart shall continue aching
As I always wanted to hold on
Silently sobbing into my pillow
I realise my dreams have gone

i do very much understand more about what you meant when you posted on my own last torch poemsong

well done poet

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2005-03-30 07:44 AM

while reading this...couldn't help but think about how beatiful life is....if we could only stop looking for affirmation from others...to be happy....

Good Morning Hope...hugs to you for this lovely....you are brave and full of wonder

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

7 posted 2005-03-30 08:05 AM

Thank you Foxy , yes I guess we hurt because we always leave our heart open
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Thank you James for your kind , understanding reply
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Bluesy .... yes each time they bite , it does help me if I can write

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Hey Dixie , I shall have to have daydreams instead of those when laid in bed
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Inky , thank you so much for your kind , understanding reply
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Lee , I truly thank you , your replies always give me that special lift

Hugs to you all Hope

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