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Open Poetry #35
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marcel
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since 2003-03-02
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az, usa
0 posted 2005-03-29 08:29 AM

“I DO”

I would do anything for you
To make you smile with the sun and blossoming flowers
Anything for you I would do
To make you feel young and beautiful forever
For you I would do anything
To make you feel treasured like the rarest of gems
Would I do anything for you?
How could my heart ever say, no…
For anything…
Would you…
“I DO”

Marcel
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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-03-29 08:34 AM

I sure hope she does...
ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2005-03-29 06:20 PM

There is only one answer to this...
Said in the panic of a heartbeat...
And quieted only with a kiss.
miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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3 posted 2005-03-29 06:34 PM

I really liked how you transposed your words, keeping the message simple but powerful.  I very much enjoyed reading your beautiful, creatively worded poem.

     miscellanea
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