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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I touchdh a he3yboard I hear a noise Birds tweek A spielling checker a typing mistake I can not see a keyboard I can check a spelling I cant see my mistakes And a glimmer of light shine that tells me a light is on And touch typing 9MHP32MK7M J0W3NM AMD TJE LEU [PSOTOPMS SEE, DOFFEREMT i LEAE ONE HAND ON THE KEYBPOARD tO TRY AND AVOID THE MISTAKE AGAIN wHILST NOISE SURROUNDS ME bUT i CAN SEE AND i HAVE SOME HEARING aND WITHOUT SEEING A HEYBOARD i CAN WRITE i DECIDED TO WRITE THIS WITHOUT OPENING MY EYES AND THAT IS HOW i WILL SUBMIT IT. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Dave, you're having too much fun LOL |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Passing Fun is probably the wrong word. Something in Froggy's words kicked something in me and that is really what this is about. Froggy wrote and Vision seemed to become important. Lack of hearing, speech and sight is the way I seem to be trying to write about in a very small way, since I can do all of this. I was trying to see how the "world" I would survive if I couldn't see. I will try another when I blank out my hearing and my sight and then try to write. Thanks Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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yes Dave, one who can see, hear, and talk can only imagine what it's like to live every day without sight, hearing, or being able to speak. It's a scary thought, but people do survive and even thrive. Helen Keller for example. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Kissing without opening the eyes is more fun...James |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks All and James Are you really sure about that. Dave |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Loved this one Dave...another favorite! Eric |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Eric Thanks Dave |
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