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Open Poetry #35

Sheer Poetry

Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-03-29 01:05 AM

Sheer Poetry

a poetic legacy
created beyond metaphor
and layers

©sdt
3/28/05

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-03-29 03:59 AM

I'm absolutely in awe here

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-03-29 07:47 AM

OUTSTANDING.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-03-29 07:48 AM

Life comes....

Tremendous...clapping to

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2005-03-29 08:03 AM

Snow
The awe of awe.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2005-03-29 12:56 PM

A heart beat, beyond metaphors, how aptly put, snow~

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

6 posted 2005-03-29 02:28 PM

simple and powerful.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
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7 posted 2005-06-17 09:07 AM

A challenge from Ed -- spend a moment today, thinking about how we should treat a good person who is one of PiP's finest poets....if not this one, then one of your choice....it seems we need to.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2005-06-17 10:47 AM

Poetic legacy, indeed... *S* This one leaves me smiling big time! *S*

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