Open Poetry #35 |
Tzu-yeh |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
At dusk Beneath the white blossoms On a road Leading West To the wide blue sea You asked if I’d like Some fruit from your basket— Some wine from the valley Cool and sweet |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You could post these with pictures....exquisitely open and sweetly balanced line drawings created with black and brightly colored inks and a one-bristle brush.... ...on second thought, there's no need. You already do exactly that. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky....James |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
RL, Thanks. This thing is more a like nod of affection to a poet whose sense in the her lines, (like Wang Wei), has had me always alert to new translations. There is such beautiful humanity that crosses the ages in her simple verse, I wanted to do something to both express my regard and draw attention to her being. Thanks again for reading. John |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool stuff |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
what a graceful poem and elegant comment. enjoyed both with half understanding. do I need to test the grapes before drink wine? |
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