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sunshinemc
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0 posted 2005-03-27 01:12 AM



Anxiety consumes me
Thoughts racing through my mind
Wondering when it will stop...
Why must it always be you?
Haunting my dreams, invading my thoughts
Teasing me constantly
You disappear once I open my eyes
I try to say that I dont care
all the love has been washed away..
Along with my pride.
But how I feel is draining too slow
Frightful it will never all fade away.
Through times of anguish
I would turn to you
And now I wish you would erase-
Take back every kiss and word exchanged
Restore my heart back to unbreakable
I can't help but thinking back
back on the days we exchanged smiles
a moment in time frozen in my thoughts
The temperature rises....
and you're gone.



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EvocativeVerse2
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1 posted 2005-03-27 04:53 AM


I liked this.
passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-03-27 09:24 AM


I can relate well

good write

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2005-03-27 12:07 PM


When love is exchanged, it is never really gone.
Superb piece of writing.
TD

DavePage
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4 posted 2005-03-27 02:21 PM


I like it as well.

Dave

PouringJewels
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5 posted 2005-04-30 02:24 AM


I have felt the same so many times for too long and wasted efforts. You would think I should no better by now. I PROMISE it will end.
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6 posted 2005-04-30 08:51 AM


SunshineMc~

'a moment in time frozen in my thoughts'

... and there within lies the 'reason' it happened at all~

Poignant penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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