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Open Poetry #35

Send home the batallions

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-03-25 12:21 PM

Open the windows

unravel the spring

break the familiar

shake free the cobwebs

run in dark cornfields

get naked with nightingales

unravel your tresses

paint purple sparrows

toss a crumb to the caterpillars

cant you see how they hunger?

pose with petunias

dosie doo with old soldiers

mime in tongues of the foreigners

imagine the impossible

send home the batallions.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2005-03-25 04:27 PM

I can't beleive I found this halfway down the page...sigh

run in dark cornfields

get naked with nightingales

unravel your tresses

paint purple sparrows

toss a crumb to the caterpillars

cant you see how they hunger?

pose with petunias

dosie doo with old soldiers

mime in tongues of the foreigners

imagine the impossible

send home the batallions.

I SAY YES!

Love this, so dreamlike but not impossible

i shall keep it

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-03-25 08:23 PM

a nice outlook

makes me smile

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

3 posted 2005-03-25 08:44 PM

I agree with Passing Shadows on this piece.
Enjoyed it.

:-)

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2005-03-25 11:54 PM

Makes me want to shed my shoes -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

5 posted 2005-03-28 09:52 PM

nice piece

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2005-03-30 01:50 PM

Pose with the petunias!!
I like that thought, I can picture you doing just that.

Good stuff and a great message, golden girl!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2005-03-30 01:59 PM

One more time now!!!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2005-03-30 02:02 PM

Very nice.

JL

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