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Two Mind Arsenal
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Two Mind Arsenal |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Two Mind Arsenal for Ratleader... Moon snapshots a top a giant room Southbound blacktop, fossilized tanning salons Beyond the foothills of ancient growth Pray for rain, to view the first sight of death With what you have left…manifests We are fools at the baroque feast Sipping soused-up non-fat milk On some deserted island where Lifeblood polishes windows Like a fair day fanning spring Swooning finger tips Handiworks of compositions Continuing existence Social receptors, catching each spectrum Various dominations of communication Fanciful, ironic Cleansing free spirited lobby groups Present timelessness, dances manifesto Of idiom…wearing codeless powers Holding a silver spoon Human labor of heterogeneous value Direct connection with artist and aura Soaring, Soaring Private meanings stepping out on higher ground Hidden perspectives dominates like surround sound Taking transformation to a whole new level Where light grows from disparate elements Fetishizing an art inseparable from its being Sewn within the fabric of fused degrees Levels of desire, into a broader ideology Subconscious parking lot, signified relationship Sounds transparent with a bottomless pit Distended entity, throwing reverie fits Beguiling half-scribed heavenly forces Compounded aspects of fatal absorption Authentic and pretty amazing, don’t you think? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Authentic and pretty amazing, don’t you think? YEP you sure are, and YEP I do.. oh, yeah... and this write was another outstanding piece of work from your gifted pen LeeJ. You are a blessing. Hugs. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I'm speechless.....therefore I won't make a speech....except to say I'm swept away by this. You've been there too, that's clear, as I have....and you express the inner workings (and non-workings) of it with such exquisite poignancy.... To read this poem is to glympse a reality of the world and the people in it, that few are blessed to see, and to have it touch my name is more than an honor. It conveys a responsibility I won't forget. I will cherish this poem. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ A poem from you to them would be keeper for anybodies ken. Enjoyed |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
authentic and pretty amazing... Yes... and so are both of you. *S* Private meanings stepping out on higher ground Hidden perspectives dominates like surround sound Taking transformation to a whole new level Where light grows from disparate elements This is magnificent. *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lovely Lee, I suppose our Dear Leader of Rats reply, says it all! You gifted him with something very special! ~ as well as all your other readers!  Love & Light, Linda  |
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