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Tossed Away
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Tossed Away |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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I carried dreams and pinches of sand, pulled forth my thoughts and let them fall... tossed them away....out of my hand Bouncing endlessly, lover’s ball. I carried choices and let you choose I spoke of smiles and traced your lips Decisions held but soon to lose, Molded a murmur, softly grips. I left a trail, covered by shells Swells of blue, ribbons of gold crunching softly, awaiting sails,. Love of two....timid and bold. Swell of grey, lashing a shore whispering...now, dancing once more. I left behind, tenderly there, Dreams of the eve, born of the dawn... tears of tomorrow, soft dampened hair. Eyes of a doe, once born a fawn.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good evening, Barry! You write with liquid gold I see!   Linda |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Barry, So good to read you again, my patriot friend. You are writing incredibly well. I held onto every word. It was a most beautiful poem. You have such amazing talent. I am glad to have shared in the reading of so many of your poems. You hold the key to a vast vault of keeper poems. This is yet another for the vault. I applaud you always. Always in awe, Kevin |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Barry, dear heart, you are incredibly giving, such sweet music to the ear you compose...way to go!!!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This one likes me... so it's libraried... Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderfully written Barry. Great flow to this. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Barry, this touches me in many many ways.. you've no idea how much... Tossed Away... sigh....yes.... consider it libraried... to be inhaled again....over and over.. I really want to care, |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
You have not lost your ability to touch my heart with your arrangement of mere words. I have missed you, my friend. Patricia |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I think that I just found a new favourite "Magnus write." Just beautiful my friend. Into my library it goes. hugs, Chris "The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Barry... Very very special this one. ~Hugs, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, You did it again. A keeper for many a lass. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Swell of grey, lashing a shore whispering...now, dancing once more." I imagine those words spoken softly and ever so close to the ear.. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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