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Open Poetry #35

Falling Less

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2005-03-24 07:26 PM

To recede from
your lips...

As if an echo broken on the
edge of distant hills.

Falling less until a silence is
found...that only you can
hear.

[This message has been edited by Ericc (03-24-2005 09:38 PM).]

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

1 posted 2005-03-24 07:31 PM

Loving the tenderness of your writing! All the creative word choices to touch one's senses...
miscellanea

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-03-24 08:04 PM

So delicate is the touch of your pen...
Much enjoyed Eric.
Hugs~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-03-25 07:32 AM

yes, extremely spiritual...dang, you certainly do grab emotion by some celestial highway....lovely!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-03-25 09:00 AM

oh Eric, you leave me with a sigh at such beauty..
gawd, I love the way you write...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2005-03-25 09:01 AM

Fall some more, or less...
but remember
to leave the poetry behind...

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2005-03-25 12:46 PM

Erotic...

yes..that is nice.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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