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To Lose The Walls Of Self
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To Lose The Walls Of Self |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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You are always within me, in my heart. I feel one too brief moment of joining, with you wrapped tightly around me, as eternity, a single moment expanded endlessly at the very edge, ecstasy into which two souls dissolved, within which all of life and its awareness exists, undeniably, as a single point of light. This is where I live, my only real home. I love you. I am with you. You are with me. Always. ©2005 by icebox |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh sigh....just LOVELY writing.. very well done sir! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ohhhhhhhhhhh You lovely, gentle man.  (and don't argue)sweet words of reassurance mr. c.  (C is for cuddly...  ) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How very beautiful this is. I see that sparkle in your kind eyes once again. *soft smile* ~Hugs~Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh man, melt me! whoever you wrote this for is one sure lucky person  and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
icebox Your words are like a warm glass of wine. |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Ah, to be granted such luxury . . . I'll indulge in the vicarious comfort of it, thank you. glider |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Box of Ice ~ you just melted my heart with such beauteous words... For whom this poem is written, she be fortunate indeed. You give a whole new meaning to the word "close"! What a world this would be if more people were "To Lose The Walls Of Self". A fine poem filled with fine sentiments.  EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beauty in you shines through |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox "This is where I live, my only real home. I love you. I am with you. You are with me. Always." The women around here are all melting with these beautiful words of forever love. Very beautifully written, my friend...she is lucky. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Truly inspired! Martie is right. I'm sure we're all melting! miscellanea |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
When I read I put myself there...I feel it, I taste, I inhale it. This I felt the grab.. the power. The "damn it, listen to me!" of it.. bravo my wonderful Icy. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
just wanted to feel the sigh again... one word....beautiful! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Love is always a thing worth sharing, and thank you for sharing this with us, Mr. C.! .....jo[This message has been edited by iliana (03-28-2005 12:00 PM).] |
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