Open Poetry #35 |
Patient Until Forever...inspired |
Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
Patient Until Forever I hear those voices again chastising me for living in a fantasy world where believing in loving one, was a foolish dream, beyond my touch. I have faded into myself praying within, my "sorrow for rent" my happiness postponed, as a princess I am not and never could be. I am in poor form, my body matted in the sweat of tears, with midnight coming too late and morning too soon, trapped in the wonderings of you. Each day my world relies on fighting, a springtime uprising needed to move ahead from the fallings of the past. I have carved patience into my mind, and the meant to be's...if ... are on repeat, just in case my forever comes true. Wordsighing today, when the body craves, the mind loves, and the patient until forever speaks in colors, blue in reflection thereof. ~A~ ( inspired by James_A_Fraser) |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Bless you for this.... "Moved" is the only word that comes to me, and it is so inadequate to describe the feeling. I can't thank you enough. ~~J |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I have carved patience into my mind, and the meant to be's...if ... are on repeat, just in case my forever comes true. Gets tiring waiting for those wounds that shape our life to heal. You express so much, so beautifully. It's one of those days, and makes me feel so sad. Hugs, A~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I have faded into myself praying within, my "sorrow for rent" my happiness postponed, as a princess I am not and never could be. This is wonderful... I love the whole... but particularly these lines... they speak me. *S* Beautiful work! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is a wonderful write..so much enjoyed. Hugs~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad you got inspired |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
awe i understand this all to well. great write |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I have carved patience into my mind, and the meant to be's...if ... are on repeat, just in case my forever comes true. Wordsighing today, when the body craves, the mind loves, and the patient until forever speaks in colors, blue in reflection thereof." Totally loved the whole thing but those two verses stood out for me... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautifully inspired writing! |
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