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Snow
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0 posted 2005-03-21 07:22 PM



"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

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1 posted 2005-03-21 07:51 PM


Your un apology accepted in passions reverberation rain dance.
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2 posted 2005-03-21 08:00 PM


wow i like the way you accept :-)

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

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3 posted 2005-03-21 08:07 PM


Very sensual Snow,  well done.
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4 posted 2005-03-21 08:08 PM


look thru the flowers dear there probably is a thorn.
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5 posted 2005-03-21 08:21 PM


someone recently told me that i should start thinking of how the thorn bush has beautiful blooms... instead of the blooms having thorns.
..... so if indeed there are, thorns.... i shall be thankful for the beauty i know is nearby.

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magnus, thank you for reading.

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6 posted 2005-03-22 01:05 AM


Love it! Bravo!
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7 posted 2005-03-22 04:59 AM


Such sensual beauty... this sizzles... reminding me that an electrical storm doesn't apologize, either. *S*
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8 posted 2005-03-22 09:05 AM


Lady Snow...

you RULE!

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awesome creation here
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11 posted 2005-03-23 08:03 AM


Great...

Thank you..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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Whew -- hot stuff!

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13 posted 2005-06-17 09:08 AM


A challenge from Ed -- spend a moment today, thinking about how we should treat a good person who is one of PiP's finest poets....if not this one, then one of your choice....it seems we need to.
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