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Open Poetry #35

pretty choices

teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

0 posted 2005-03-18 10:27 AM

Choices are crazy things
make one and make another
lead you this way and that
it doesn't matter
choose another way
and this choice it's all mine
you tell me so
and I don't quite know
what I want to do
I want to give the choice to you
but you want me to be sure
make the choice
on my own
and so I stand and think too much
because I need to make a choice
all the choices lined up there
which one do I want
pretty choices made to please
which one is right for me?
choices choices choices there
and I chose you
because you make me the happiest
and it was all my choice

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

1 posted 2005-03-18 12:24 PM

Right you are! Choices seem so hard to make! Enjoyed your words.
miscellanea

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-03-18 12:28 PM

"choices choices choices there
and I chose you
because you make me the happiest
and it was all my choice"

Smiling at this..and you...
this is wonderful as are you.

Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-03-18 01:45 PM

good write! enjoyed!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-03-19 09:13 PM

Nice to read that you made the right choice...its a bummer to experience the consequences of a bad choice...James

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2005-03-19 10:01 PM

Well done! Much enjoyed. Chris

You are ice and fire. The touch of you burns my hands like snow.
~Amy Lowell~

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

6 posted 2005-05-06 02:43 PM

Thank you!!!

I don't know if I made the right choice. But at that point in time it felt like the right choice! The fact that I made a choice at all is the surprising part!!

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