Primal Scream (from the ramble series...)

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2005-03-17 12:07 PM

Just let me scream
and pretend
that you would
hear me...
and see me...
for the first time
as you looked past
the surface rhyme
and all
of my          vulnerabilities..

deeper   to a place
        of strength
that you didn't believe
resided in me..

Did you really think
I would fall
to my knees again,
that I would be too weak
        to stand alone
                       on my own....

While each step taken
might be heart heavy
burden laden

I have fought
this war
before,

survived only to move
onto the next battle
that would leave me        scarred

                  but I'm still here..
                              I persevere.......

and pick myself up
to face
what’s in store

and once again
I'll try
to not blame myself
anymore....

I really want to care,
I want to feel something
let me dig a little deeper
NAH, still nothing...
My give a DAMN is busted....Jodee

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-03-17 12:09 PM

Very positive..yes, extremely well written.
Hugs pretty lady~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-03-17 12:44 PM

deeper to a place
of strength
that you didn't believe
resided in me..

then, this person did not know you....
I hate it when people assume...and think of us they way they are...

Again, another book from the heart of a gentle but vibrant spirit

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-03-17 12:50 PM

Thanks Nancy and LeeJ.
Assumption, as they say,
is the mother of all screw ups...

aint it the truth!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-03-17 02:02 PM

understanding this

hugs

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2005-03-17 07:03 PM

I have fought
this war
before,

survived only to move
onto the next battle
that would leave me        scarred

                  but I'm still here..
                              I persevere.......

that you have, that you have, and this is amazing, Donna . . . we all have to just dust off and start over . . . no matter how hard it seems.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2005-03-18 08:58 AM

Dixie, thanks bunches hon..

Suzie...
yes, we do....sigh....
hugs.....yer a doll....

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2005-03-18 09:36 AM

just look out the other window
the view ne can't see
it is yours
all yours

unless you invite
another's eyes to join there

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2005-03-18 09:42 AM

Hey Dark?

and thanks big guy....
appreciate you.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

9 posted 2005-03-18 09:44 AM

You and me, both. We have to move on just to show that we can indeed do it on our own, I do know how hard the battles are. Believe me, I know.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

10 posted 2005-03-18 10:13 AM

Oh Donna - you do move me and strength stands in your words - wonderful write

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2005-03-18 11:16 AM

loved this screaming release

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

12 posted 2005-03-24 07:58 AM

Thank you, each and hugs to you each.

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