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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
He fell in love with her eyes And when given the chance to look into them He told her how nice the weather was ~ ~ ~ And she thanked him, with her whole heart Copyright Kkh 11/12/04 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautiful thoughts |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Interesting - I imagine he liked what he saw, the summer within her eyes, and she gave him her heart - makes me happy to see it that way anywho - Enjoyed - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Timid be the heart that misses the beauty of soul passage. There is something to be said for a write that says so much with so few words. Well thought out and honest in it's appeal. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
This says so much in so few words - a gift I do not possess but wish I had. Eyes - what mysterious things they are. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Sometimes you are just speechless.... but, you know. Thanks, Melton |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Had to read it twice...  Great write! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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