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Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2005-02-04 10:48 PM

Your poison bleeds my heart,
Death soon will do us part.
I can't see everything you want to show me,
Your fingers scratch my eyes.
I can't figure anything out,
Sitting in a daze..a clout.
I can't see everything you want to show me,
Your fingers scratch my eyes.
Why I feel so hollow I cannot say,
Crying at night hoping you wish to stay.
I can't see everything you want to show me,
Your fingers scratch my eyes.
I can't taste the poison that I'm drinking,
Your death is in disguise.
I can't see everything you want to show me,
Your fingers scratch my eyes.
Your poison bleeds my heart,
And in case you didnt know...
Your poison is your love.
I can't see everything you want to show me,
Your fingers scratch my eyes.

i cant taste the poison that im drinking your death is in disguise

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2005-02-05 11:13 AM

Golly gee, Hot Flakes, it sounds as though she is not good for your heart ~ or spirit!

You sure can pull this reader into your world with your emotive writing!

Perhaps you should get out into the sunshine and breathe in some revitalizing fresh air. I think it would make you feel much better.

Sending you a warm hug and a "There, there. Everything is going to be alright" pat on your back!

EA

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2005-02-05 05:44 PM

this makes me think of when someone is dying that we've had a harsh relationship with - like a parent or grandparent - and what they thought of as their love was poison to our souls and now at their death things just aren't going to be okay, they'll never be okay - too much poison - but that's just my thoughts-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2005-02-05 06:04 PM

All I can say is awesomely written.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

4 posted 2005-02-10 11:30 AM

Awesome write child

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-02-10 11:34 AM

hugs and good thoughts sent your way

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