Open Poetry #34 |
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earthdust Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 53predestined and foreknown |
If you only knew the feelings i have so deep inside, such as the sorrow in my heart should i ever make you cry, or jouyousness that fills me up from the bottom to the top, in the happy times we laugh so much the whole world 'round us stops, and overwhelming longing for the pleasing pulse of passion; a fire kindled deep within burning in lustful fashion, perhaps then you can understand just how I love you so. I cherish you with all my heart, from where my feelings flow. " Understanding is more valuable than diamonds. If you can understand me, Then you are a very rich person. " |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very pretty |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
loving and beautiful. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Have been there myself before. Very nice write and enjoyed. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A wonderful expression of deep love. Well done. TD |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
the love for ones companion... so sweet. ~Express Yourself~ |
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