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Magnus
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0 posted 2004-11-13 03:11 PM


Wheat dime, ten cents rubbing a
small hole, soon to escape the
wandering steps.  Street talk
touching his ears, eyes as he
dodged gum, shuffled a paper
aside and looked longingly into
a bluebird sky.

Above him, birds flew from one
ledge to another, defying the
gravity that gave them life.  A
solitary cooing of a dove unheard
within the wail of taxi horns and
hawkers selling cheap wares.

She had walked this path, for her
scent still lingered the morning air.
Or, was it his overcoat that had stolen
it from her?  He could hear the click
of her heels echoing the alley beside
him...but darkness had kept her away
from straining orbs that salivated to
just kiss a stray ruby lip.

Yes, the huskiness of her voice, calling
out against the neon buzz, overwhelming
the squeal of black tires on damp asphalt,
he heard her speak out to him, if only in
a momentary doze beside the streetlight.

Soon night would come again, as ladies
danced and primped, pranced and pimped
the shuffling walk.   And then he might
see her, as silken legs lifted the clouds and
a pert derriere’ caught his gaze...once
more.

© Copyright 2004 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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1 posted 2004-11-13 03:17 PM


Wow, Barry!

The imagery in this piece was nothing short of brilliant.  Your words came to life upom the page.  Fabulous, as always.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-11-13 04:23 PM


Excellent Barry...
May we ask for more like this one?
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2004-11-13 04:53 PM


Static electricity for imagery!
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-11-13 05:22 PM


pert...oh those were the days
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