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Winter's Appetite
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Winter's Appetite |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
It nears The scent of slumber When all of nature lays to fast Beneath the claim of gemstone wonder My words take frolic in your mind Did you receive that affirmation? Still shy but maybe I Could weave to gold the un-mistakes Concluding worthy conversation Let drift the past, the lessons we were sent to learn The loves that will forever burn, forgiven and held dear It nears Another time to reach and find… Of favorite things to share…I look beyond uncertain stare Undressing velvet gowned insight, and making love the feeling there For I am just a woman made of dreams Without shoes, the snow becomes my bed of white moonbeams And I have yet to learn the dance Set free upon the frosting of romance I hunger for the intimate of fire Every moment spent in the embrace of our desire As sift upon the pain, that peaceful still that comes in every snow To make with him the path our lives will go Creating moments to taste well, the recipe for pleasures in the future dwell It nears His scent in secret pleases understood Made angels in the slide of feel good And he, the snow upon my need, as in the fall of love we feed Copyright Kkh 11/11/04 |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah, Kathleen - you actually make me long for the company of winter - and that, my dear friend, is an amazing feat! Hugs - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Flarrs in the snow...hmmmm, perhaps. You take something as simple as snow and turn it into a banquet for the soul. You excel in this, yanno? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Kathleen so beautiful and lyrical..very much enjoyed thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Definitely worthy of more thought before replying to this one. A beauty of a poem laced with some wonderfully intense images and thoughts. I will be back if that is okay. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond Your army of symbols have ridden to the brink of the abyss. Enjoyed. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful weaving Katherine...just beautiful The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you very much for your kind comments, constant support, and for your company...which I enjoy completely. TD |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
As promised I came back. Just wanted to compliment you on the construction of your works. You have a great command of the English language and your ability to turn a phrase is well polished. I consider you to be a fine poet. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
fine? she is mighty fine more than mighty fine......... she is a diva bow to this lady please  |
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