Open Poetry #34 |
Shadow Dancing |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Shadow Dancing I dance amongst cascades Of shadow draped words Waltzing in time To the cadence of your heart Sweeping ‘round the room In blissful disarray Of heart beat flutters And butterfly tingles Crinoline swishing Satin swaying Bosom rising In heated pleasure Of your symphony s.a.t. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Some awesome notes played here, dear Susan. You have done well in this writing. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you kindly, my dear Sir - hugs to you today - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I think I see you and Valentino dancing as Fred and Ginger Hopefully you are not too young to know of whom I speak...you look quite young in the photo, however. So if you are, ask your grandmama. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah, Virginia, you make me smile - thank you - I do know Fred and Ginger - my mother loved their movies - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely this Susan! Much enjoyed the music of your words. Hugs~ Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
so is this for me or one of them other cowboys...mmmmmmm I could get into this woman..I mean what she says (grin) |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) Dark... she ain't talking to me... Susan... nice sensual flow to this ma'am... well done. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh...Yesssss....this is sensually wonderful! The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you my friends - for your smiles and kindness - Dark - you make me chuckle dear cowpoke - hehe- Hugs all - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Beautiful.... *Allison* ~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~ |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful. Eric |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Short, sweet, and as has been noted, beautiful. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you my beautiful friends - I appreciate the kind replies - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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