Open Poetry #34 |
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My Best Friend |
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branden726![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI ![]() |
My Best Friend Today I came home only to fear, The phone call my mother got, The message in her ear. I come home and sat at the table, The words that come out of her mouth, I believe its some kind of fable. The message I got was what you would think, My best friend gone, To be buried at my feet. I was the one that carried him to his grave, Now think twice about this, And the decisions you make. I live with horror, I live with pain, I live in constant sorrow, Because he couldn’t live with the pain. I beg you all to read this and learn, Your life on this earth, Is cherished by others and it’s a right you have earned. I buried my best friend, I hope you have not, It’s something you will never forget, Until death do you part. |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this tugs the heart, I am so sorry for your loss..... ~~*~~ |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Yes I can feel this It is in it's way strange, almost haunting as if you are taking the blame and then exorcising that feeling Dave |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Branden, a very touching poem. It would be nice to know how the inspiration for it came to you. |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
very touching and well written. ~myheart~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
oh dear, i hope this isn't personal |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hugs to you... |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
my heart goes out to you! you expressed it quite well ![]()
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