Open Poetry #34 |
Soothsayer (Senryu's) |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I did not forget the sound of your gentle voice whispering my name. Soft and sensual calling the woman within calming the spirit. Private soothsayer come to me in dreams again and let me feel you.... {my thanks to a special muse...} The greatest beauty on earth, is found in the hearts of those who love.... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done ma'am... the muse sounds pleasing through your words.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
laffin* sounded even better through their words... ...but thanks much for that Ron. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
it is good to sigh a lady with such sensations you bless this person here |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle A gentle write, enjoyed. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
send him my way for a bit okay? i could use a new dream |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sey, thanks hon. Michele, I most certainly wish yours comes to you and makes all of your dreams come true soon hon! Hearthugs |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
I really enjoyed this....thank you. INclan |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmmmm- Donna - beautiful - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Donna...very lovely! Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ah, yes, to be continually thankful for inspiration, even if sometimes I myself feel it's the "curse of the verse." Perhaps my friends who've "had enough" now and then think it that, as well. Enjoyed this tender and delicate write. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
It's always nice to have inspiration and you have given a soft look into yours. Very nice. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
again, my thanks to each of you! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
You have such a kind nature Donna, another nice poem from the the gentle spirit..thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good read for a gray morning like the one I have today |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetGentleSpirit~ Oh my ... how very pretty is this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nicely written |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Loved this..beautiful! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna, take a bow! Wonderfully written! Linda |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Special, indeed! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Yanno? Ya'll are pretty darn great! thanks and hugs to each! The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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