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The Birds |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Birds A bird sits on my front yard tree A straw in mouth a nest to be He bobs a little where to lace Than weaves it in the proper place Off he goes in search of more He has a nest to build of straw Industrious beyond belief He knows the season is quite brief He cannot stop or slow the pace For he must find a damsels grace He knows the proper touch of time Nature gives just so much prime And then she came with much display To check the nest in every way And when she felt the nest well done It’s then the two became as one. Comments on the birds and bees It’s all within the blooming trees. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
smiles and hugs...my my my, you are the chipper one this morn.... Your a joy to read, and a great cup of noni juice... Hiya Sy and Good morning, thank you for the delightful read |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
a very serene way to start my day. Good morning Sey. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Keep your eye on the sky, Sy... it's a good way to watch the sun rise! Good morning, m'friend!   |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You always start my day with a smile Sy! Enjoyed this lovely. ~Mornng hugs, Nancy~ Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done Sy!! Winter is coming here..and the nesting season is long gone. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Morning Sy! I've missed reading you with my coffee in the AM...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
He cannot stop or slow the pace For he must find a damsels grace He knows the proper touch of time Nature gives just so much prime ============================ I just love the wisdom of that verse. You write me tree hugging heart with this one Sy-babers!! Natures prime wrapped in your rhyme--IM GIDDY!! LOL  *ww*    Poetry is emotion put into measure. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I wish I had been told of the birds and bees in such a sweet and poetic manner. I darn near tossed my angel cookies when my Dad told me the "story"! ~ Mind you, I've grown up a lot since those days!  Honey hugs, EA |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I think it quite appropriate to be in attendance of a birds and bees lecture by our resident master.... Enjoyed the write, Sir Sy... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Sir Sy, sigh... Too adorable of a sonnet with an ode upon it. hehehe, inspection to see if he is truly enamored with her graces, strong enough to build with the utmost care a lovely piece Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Good morning sweet, thanks for the beautiful comment. Gentle, Glad you enjoyed, thank you. Sunshine Good morning dear and you are that. Nancy, Thanks for the enjoy. scorpio LOL it will come again. Duncan Well there is always tomorrow. JM, Didn't Randy tell you about the birds and the trees? Winkiewinkie Earth Angel, This is about the birds and the trees not bees. LOL Barry, You mean the birds and the trees. LOL VAS Thanks for the lovely. |
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