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Open Poetry #34
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whiskey
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0 posted 2004-11-11 07:22 AM


Love me like my lips
Are the softest
That you've ever felt
Upon yours

Love me like my eyes
Are the only ones
That you've ever looked
Into within

Love me like my mind
Is the only mind
That your mind has ever
Understood

Love me like my heart
Is the only heart
That has given you
Love returned

Love me like my soul
Is the only soul
That completes
Your soul whole

Love me like this moment
Is the last your lungs
Will breath
Exsistance for this life

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "
© Copyright 2004 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
1 posted 2004-11-11 07:26 AM

Wonderful poem, and probably the way we all feel, we'd like to experience life with our soul mate

This was a pleasure read..thank you
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
2 posted 2004-11-11 07:49 AM

Julie the last stanza in this beautiful write set the poem off perfectly! Enjoyed.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....
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