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Open Poetry #34

A new night Kiss

Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

0 posted 2004-11-10 10:12 PM

a new night kiss

Stars shimmer
as diamonds
upon the backlit
darkness of a night sky
moon off sets
the obisidan over hang
dancing across
the wind
penetrating full leaves
of a mighty oak
playing across
new found lovers

His eyes met hers
an aura of comfort
radiated while
euphoric smiles
echoed within the night
she rested her head
against his heart beat
as they watched
the empty park
in which they met.

her eyes met his once more
as they leaned closer
for a new night kiss

(this is a follow up to Love of a passer by. i hope you enjoy)

nice use of muffin

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-11-10 10:24 PM

Very nicely done John...much enjoyed the follow up read.
Hugs~

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2004-11-10 11:24 PM

Enjoyed....James

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2004-11-11 07:30 AM

Very romantic John.
You capture the feeling as well as the setting.
TD

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