Open Poetry #34 |
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Secrets Of A White Dawn |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
There were questions That seemed to float within the air To never know if he was there Not for certain Moving through her sleep Rounding o’er the satin edge Shoulder straps let fall in hedge Silence but a curtain Comforting in twilight slip, casting but a shadows lip Whispers through the pine, a timid and conducive sign Responses firmed beneath the veils she wore Fading dark to lighter shades that slipped the floor Then turning to his eyes, the questions low homogenize As purple made amends to pink, and pillows fluffed a yellow wink The light lay gently on his chest, made mention of her answer Yes Copyright Kkh 11/10/04 |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
smooth as a babe's behind and warm as the afternoon sun setting lazily amongst the pines....as they whisper the echo of "yes".. Nice, very nice K. Yuh dun good with the flarrs.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Responses firmed beneath the veils she wore Fading dark to lighter shades that slipped the floor Then turning to his eyes, the questions low homogenize As purple made amends to pink, and pillows fluffed a yellow wink The light lay gently on his chest, made mention of her answer Yes" Beautiful Kathleen..simply lovely. Hugs~ Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely beautiful, Kathleen. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
This was pure satin and love in motion pleasureable read for certain...thank you |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Confirmation in the break of a new day can shine light across any shadow of question. I have no doubt a "yes" well received. |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well done... indeed.. well done.. a true pleasure to read.. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
A beautiful poem. Eric |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Moving through her sleep Rounding o’er the satin edge Shoulder straps let fall in hedge Silence but a curtain Lovely ThisDiamond. very much enjoyed. ~myheart~ Love is the poetry of the senses. ~Honoré de Balzac |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just awesome! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Then turning to his eyes, the questions low homogenize As purple made amends to pink, and pillows fluffed a yellow wink The light lay gently on his chest, made mention of her answer Yes ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ No one can deny this is some awesome writing. Hard to choose which part is best. Deb |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Oooooooo.... This is soooooo nice! Excellent write! JL |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
As always, your words flow in beauty to the page - ![]() Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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