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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-11-09 07:38 PM

we did small talk
and some crayons
that made pictures
on bricks
that were not stacked

but discarded
a couple at a time
like the old days
on calendars
with the x's gone

sharing you with him
on the swing seat
I did the pushing
but you always landed
on him and said hero

he knew the woman
but I got the girl
when she was a lady
and wore cotton
with moon skin under

you were mine then
when you pressed my eyes
with a profile or two
and said do you think of me
when you take naps

and sip koolaid
under the awning
on summer day nights
and bring warm man hands
to my empty knight sky

to make my caramel sighs candy

_________Dark

scribblenote: anything done is done better
with mirrors

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-11-09 07:53 PM

What images...
you are one amazing
stranger...

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2004-11-09 09:18 PM

DS

You make my caramel sigh candy!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-11-09 09:23 PM

D- you write things so lovely - your imagery is magical and a gift - I can lose myself in your words -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-11-09 09:28 PM

Delicious!

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2004-11-11 08:13 AM

and bring warm man hands
to my empty knight sky

your words are like butterflies within cocoons finding their way out from inside

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2004-11-11 09:28 AM

he knew the woman
but I got the girl
when she was a lady
and wore cotton
with moon skin under

you were mine then
when you pressed my eyes
with a profile or two
and said do you think of me
when you take naps

classic Dark....

always a pleasure to read you..

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2004-11-11 09:46 AM

Dark,
"anything done is done better
with mirrors" is a poem in itself. Enjoyed.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2004-11-11 11:01 AM

and wore cotton
with moon skin under
========================

your personifications make the moon and the moths sigh.

Poetry is emotion put into measure.
The emotion comes by nature ...
but the measure is acquired by art.

Thomas Hardy

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