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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2004-11-08 04:05 PM

In quiet abyss
I find you
where sight means less
than sensitivity of heart
where senses make clear
what deafens the ears
fingertips and ripened
lips make known true intentions
I am powerless in limbs
to hold you, but with love
molded to you
songs are stifled in
my throat, dying to be
sung
even my tears in fall
remain unnoticed, unseen
so in this way I speak~
bottled message to you
begging,

read

me...

~tier

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-11-08 04:08 PM

"so in this way I speak
my bottled message to you
begging, read

me..."

Such a pleading of words here Tier.
An ache crying out to be soothed.
Well done.
Hugs~Nancy

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-11-08 04:13 PM

Ah, Tier,
when you come home,
it is always a beautiful
entrance, even in its
sadness...

myheart
Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 160
lost in your eyes

3 posted 2004-11-08 04:39 PM

Very touching poem. Enjoyed.
~myheart~

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

4 posted 2004-11-08 04:56 PM

A true delight ...

hugs, Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2004-11-08 05:00 PM

very well done m'friend... as always touching.. and with talent..

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2004-11-08 10:14 PM

Very nice Tier, one can hear this quiet song.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2004-11-09 02:00 PM

Wow...!!!

Eric

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2004-11-09 02:06 PM

very well done Tier....gawd this one tugs...
there is such beauty in your writing...

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2004-11-09 02:10 PM

written directly from the heart
Kind, well put....thank you

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