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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Keyless press once and the door locks twice and the horn pips for me sometimes I do it to hear the sound machine or not at least it’s a reaction and I need that I don’t care that I’m locking locked doors [This message has been edited by James_A_Fraser (11-09-2004 07:53 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
DANG man... this one hurts! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!!! Fantastic write!! Hugs~Nancy Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I agree with Sunshine... this one hurts!!! And not at all what you should know, my friend... however well you write the ache of forlorn, the pain of not feeling you matter, I wish/hope it's imagination!! And if it's not... let me at 'em... a little suthern hellraising should wake 'em up to appreciating you! *G* |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Awesome! Just awesome!! ~myheart~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie....snif  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Glad I found this! It's the type of poem that will keypt turning over and over in my cranial engine! I admire how you take a simple concept and scope it from different angles. You're a master at this... misc'e |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
(Had to come back and put this in my library) |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
I wrote this one with PIP in mind, actually -- to capture the feeling that I'd had (and keep having, alas) when I wrote my soul into a poem and almost nobody replied.....at that point I was questioning why I bother to post....still do, sometimes. AND -- Nobody read it~! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Jamie: I think that is the unfortunate fate of some of the best poetry given to us on these blue pages... I just hope those with few reads never give up... for popularity and excellence are not always the same things. *S* As for this poem... it made such an impact that I thought about it all the time I was on vacation with my sister in a rental car with a remote lock. *S* That isn't an effect you see here... but it is the measure of good poetry... that it's remembered long after the computer is turned off and the reader turns to the non-poetic world. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I felt the pain in this one. Awesome write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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