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Day Six and Fevered Dress Of Night Shed
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Day Six and Fevered Dress Of Night Shed |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
“She wore black moiré Last night and donned Opals to accent the curve Of her neck as it was bared For any like me to beg understanding Of her skin That changed from warm Supple caress of my thighs To the bite of chill When she took my hand Into her depths This morning she was calm Indecisive in direction she would move and I wondered how she would stir under my own gaze if she knew I was watching” ……………………………. I penned the last word and closed The leather binding Then listened for your breath Easy now And not as labored as it had been When in the grip of fever you had asked To be in my soul I had tried To let you see the gentler parts of me But you spoke of demons later In a fitful turn of half lucid sleep Leaving me to worry You might see enough of me to know There is no gentle in ones heart that is not also Tempered with the steel cages we build To keep at bay our own fears Our own failings But for now you slept And I had watched the Lady Blue under moonlight Break stars into the glisten of fragmented dreams Only to wear them along her curves Enticing me the wet of her Druid Charm …………………………………………………… “I have slept beside her on many a night And felt her beg me closer With Gaelic murmurs too deep in resonance To fully comprehend.” …………………………………………………….. So Day Six began [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (11-08-2004 10:09 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
... I had watched the Lady Blue under moonlight Break stars into the glisten of fragmented dreams Only to wear them along her curves Enticing me the charm of her wet Druid Charm ~*~ Oh, I knew this was going to be a good week... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
“I have slept beside her on many a night And felt her beg me closer With Gaelic murmurs to deep in resonance To fully comprehend.” you are a narrative that burns, like wheels turning by good hands...what a way to express affections...love reading you! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"But for now you slept And I had watched the Lady Blue under moonlight Break stars into the glisten of fragmented dreams Only to wear them along her curves Enticing me the charm of her wet Druid Charm …………………………………………………… “I have slept beside her on many a night And felt her beg me closer With Gaelic murmurs to deep in resonance To fully comprehend.”" Yes..day six has begun and I am anxiously waiting... Excellent write sir. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
glad i stopped by, guess i better catch up. this is truly enjoyable  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I have been reading your series and I find day six is a great time to tell you that I find not only great pleasure in your works but I find visions and life lessons in your words. Keep 'em coming and I will keep reading for sure. You sir should be the voice of a series on the screen. Masterfully done!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron "There is no gentle in ones heart that is not also Tempered with the steel cages we build To keep at bay our own fears Our own failings" ------------- Profound!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have the uncanny ability to affect my breathing when I am reading your poetry. It vacillates between rapid and slow ~ and sometimes I stop breathing altogether!  EA |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
I have slept beside her on many a night And felt her beg me closer With Gaelic murmurs too deep in resonance To fully comprehend damn, chief... **babyblu** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
touching the screen, the keys absorbing your touch masterfully written you are CAPTAIN |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
“She wore black moiré Last night and donned Opals to accent the curve Of her neck as it was bared For any like me to beg understanding Of her skin That changed from warm Supple caress of my thighs To the bite of chill When she took my hand Into her depths ==================================== Lordy ... ya had me from the first gorgeous verse... *moth puddles*  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
There is no gentle in ones heart that is not also Tempered with the steel cages we build To keep at bay our own fears Our own failings Good Lord yes, but you hide yours quite well. |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
*wow* ~myheart~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Gee Wiz Sir...you had my attention from get go Absolutely wonderful. Mxx into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
hmmmmm... another yummy chapter. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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