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Open Poetry #34

The Beat Goes On

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2004-11-07 09:13 PM

in the look of I
as presence forms,
   a deadly smile
   strikes awhile,
and my heart so warns

in the fail to see
of dreams come true,
   for my heart drops,
   pressure crops,
in the fields of you

harvest bitter moons
...the beat goes on,
   where life does shine
   love will dine,
from dreams believed gone

   as pressure forms,
   the beat goes on

"In life's giving ... love is a gift, such worth living."

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-11-07 09:31 PM

"in the fail to see
of dreams come true,
   for my heart drops,
   pressure crops,
in the fields of you

harvest bitter moons
...the beat goes on,
   where life does shine
   love will dine,
from dreams believed gone"

Excellent write Craig...very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

myheart
Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 160
lost in your eyes