Open Poetry #34 |
All Things Well and Good |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is the time of bitter sharp warm, Where tinge clash of ice Against face and hands Strike, chilling one’s body with Flecks of burning heat Killing off all that would take over, Striking down weeds of doubt, Killing vines that wind O’er one’s heart, Pulling everything back to Beginnings Ice sings in crystal sharp breezes, Huddling takes over, one alone or Together, hunkering down against onslaughts That dulls minds to a torpor for moments Or spaces, As various ways of survival come forth… Only those that face the burning ice know Deep within, whether or not Summer cool breezes will sing again… Only those Who believe in tomorrow And in their reasons to seek the heat of ice To kill the devil inside All things that would overtake them. Rebirth is imminent Of all things Well, and good. ~*~ For two who need reminding That they are NOT alone. Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
::touching:: your pen strong and reassuring on the page... love&light, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea/sissy As always your strength and love shine through! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
you are beautiful Kari, and so is this fine write you have penned. Maree into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you for this |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Thank you for this Karilea.. Your words are so comforting and reassuring. Yes...rebirth. Hugs~ Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Indeed rebirth lady.. whispering thanks for the beauty of this one... The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
beautiful weaving, Sunshine! the photo is exquisite, too. It looks like it could have been taken just seven miles north of here. Really enjoyed reading this one, the nippiness and the warmth! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ahhhh, the hope of tomorrow. We will hunker down for a long winter's sleep and be reborn and refreshed come the warmth of spring. I loved this ... your writing brings me warmth. hugs and smiles, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Together we weather all storms... Your compassion is showing. ~ and your talent. EA |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A good reminder, my friend, of the passages of life. Corinne |
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