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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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scent association with the obvious of intellect Where is your emotion, child? Changeling worshipping caress words that do not cling to me strident Harper's livery I see every shadow of your keep but I cannot suckle you. I could parse your sentences and you would read a catalog of a human being freed clever as the ticking clock mimicking the beat of free and never spill a heart-blood drop. Just another parlor trick lose these lessons taught to you like the Buddhist in the chant knowing that they don't know that smiling secrets kept until the moment hesitates, illumed: Thrice the crowing of the cock in the shadows of the word stating that they know this not-- scent association with the obvious of intellect embracing ludicrous absurd. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity "Thrice the crowing of the cock in the shadows of the word stating that they know this not--" Now that is delicious poetry Good morning sweet  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
scent association with the obvious of intellect Where is your emotion, child? ~*~ Having to smile at this... as its very subject arose times three just yesterday... leave it to you to feel my thoughts...  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Just look at you...smiling...you're gorgeousness, gorgeous.  love ya Mxx into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*smiling* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Ser!  Love ya lady~ Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
there is no inscrutable emotion the trials of finding the balance are the trails blazed with failure the balance is the average for us the only time we flatline is when dead smile we are doomed to ups and downs and religions are littered with the attempts to make us dead flat happy life is beautiful life is pain both |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
and what do I find here but two beautiful songs . . . there is nothing ludicrous in that. Beautiful writing guys. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I have to think on this one - on its intent -sometimes I think I'm too defined in the obvious that the subtle slips by me - ah, well, I enjoy the feel of the words anyway  Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
mmm...Karen I am so glad I found this... damn.. excellent writing. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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