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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Fall on the GI Bill I walk to school as usual the campus not far from where I live the air is cool I have long hair and wear a beard on the road I see your car approaching you wave I nod my head we are young strong and ignorant with innocence the leaves rustle under a cloudless sky |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
good read john, as usual. does Huan mean John? |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Derrick, Thank you for bringing up a, personal, favorite poem. Huan Yi was the reputed composer of “Three Variations on the Theme of Plum Blossoms” written sometime between AD 265 and 420; a beautiful melody usually now played on flute. I personally have several CD versions. John |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hmmmm this was like pressure sounds...nice ones....like little electrical fingers up and down the spine, soothing and taking us to a place of sublime. |
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