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a furiousity
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a furiousity |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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The way he said it sounded good as shadows on the wall were mime I thought that it had been rehearsed perhaps he might have taken time practicing his stance in glimpse of a mirror angling pondering the eyebrow lift-- just that one--as Eastwood did - squinting his blue-eyed defense the sun burnt amber ambience capturing that cold lone eye playing to the audience-- whistling the tune of boots begging for the Hyde of horse leaving me in corset strings tangled in remorse and sheets wet with his amused regret that he'd given me that much, as though I were a charity-- shrugging off another slut-- tossing silver on my bed-- "a furiousity," I said to an empty room of gone... laughing with my legs in spread the shadows on the wall were mine "watch me I am butterfly" as I toss the coin to heads in multiples of loss, I said: "The way he said it sounded good." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
at least there is one thing in life we can claim to be our own...our shadow |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You never fail to amaze, and you never lack for honesty...  Gotta love a gal like that! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, I am past throwing stones and I wouldn't even if I could. You are a poet par excelance.  |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
wow. I don't think I have ever read anything so amazing. Right from one's soul. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity This leaves me sad, but also proud to know you!  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
damn. i'll just leave it at that. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You m'lady, blow me away, just don't blow too hard I might just disappear all together lol. Sei una poeta incredibile, sorprendente.  Mxx into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You write as the granite face of the ancient cliffs... Surviving brutality, with an ageless timeless and tender face. I love your unique style Karen. TD |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
it is just stunning the way you can combine artistry with honesty it is achieving something to be able to do ONE of those things to be a remarkable poet you can use words well and clever to be a remarkable person you can be honest as yourself to anyone but you baby put it all together unabashed naked with mastery of medium and some universality mixed in there is no bias when I say... go get published now |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
We are easily bought and sold The poetry comes at a little higher price still readin ya and shakin my head . . . e |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*dittoing and seconding the motion and emotion of Bri's reply.*  the sun burnt amber ambience I was moth ecstatic from that line.... and THEN I got to here......... with my legs in spread the shadows on the wall were mine "watch me I am butterfly" *shaking me head* .... whoa............. damn ............ (you rock) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ya'll make me smile even when I don't feel much like it.  see? ya'll are wonderful. thank you |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I second Bri here K . . . you take the simplest anything and turn it into the most everything. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I agree... Bri said it best... This... and you... simply amazing... love you, lady... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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