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dream catcher heart
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dream catcher heart |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Dream catcher heart seeing through the thin of me touching my bare skinned moments as if... as if you belonged within while you, deftly began gifting in synchronicity songs that enraptured me, note by note upon my heart you wrote your heart beat, and filled my willing lungs with the very air necessary to breathe, and as the day turns its face toward night, I did turn to you for sustenance, for the essence of existence, with longing arms reaching for the bass line, the substance of you. Is it any wonder I feel lost without you? |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
No, it's no wonder at all. Beautifully said, Midnitesun. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanking you for visiting, and for that reply Helen. You have a very understanding heart, and it shows in your poetry as well as your replies. peace and harmony to you |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Many lines to love here! TD |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you, Kathleen. I always enjoy your poetry, and am honored when you visit mine. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
chuckles at the sweetness and tenderness protrayed here |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Mucho warmth and feeling here my friend... loved it... jimmy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a fine write |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
kacy this is just beautiful !!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thanking each of you for your warm notes |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Dream catcher heart seeing through the thin of me touching my bare skinned moments as if... as if you belonged within ================================= you could have stopped right there and it would have been perfection.... the rest was poetic extra credit.  Beautiful wistful write Kacy-girl Poetry is emotion put into measure. |
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