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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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You try and to find love A one so deep That no one can still That one love away You look for so long But it never comes And the deeper your Lonliness and depression comes The deeper the depression The deeper the sadness goes To the point You just want to give up hope Deeper and Deeper Year after Year You get sick of looking You get sick of trying So failure after failure Deep down inside Your heart turns cold And goes from red to black Deeper and deeper your love pulls back Until all that is in your heart Is nothing but hate and pain And all you feel is empitiness inside Then after awhile You feel nothing Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Julie Love will come into your life when you least expect it. I am sure many people feel that finding love is hopeless. Don't give up! Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know how you feel I think I gave up a long time ago....if it happens, it happens...I'm impartial now |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I know how this feels. If this is about you I wish for brighter days. It's sad but you wrote about it so well! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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lil' Angel Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 116 |
I hope you find someone. Don't give up. Lil' Angel |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
This breaks my heart - there is a lot to be said for love thyself - then spread the love with no expectations for reciprocation - and you will find that love will surround you - it's good karma  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
Then after awhile You feel nothing quite sad...but true |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AhJulie~ And then suddenly ... you turn one more corner ... and there it is  Honest Injun~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
very sad poem. but the heart is stronger than you know. well done. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"Deeper and deeper your love pulls back Until all that is in your heart Is nothing but hate and pain And all you feel is empitiness inside." ouch.  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Julie Girl: Lift up that pretty little head of yours and be proud... You write from your heart, and there is nothing there but light. No drama, no hate...just smooth calm waters. Expressed these dips into oblivion very well. TD |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
is the reward greater than the wait? Is the wait greater than the reward? The reward is inevitable, tho it seems not...funny, never thought of "love" in these terms til now, but it's sorta like working on a contract basis. One day you have a job, next day you don't....but each day you do is wonderful, and you forget all about the days of naught. Hopefully the next day you do...there will never again come a "naught" \ jwesley |
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