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Open Poetry #34

I believe it was me

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2004-11-06 07:45 PM

I believe it was me
who avowed in my sleep
to keep the vision of you,
your eyes, your smile,
your calmness beside
my emotional side.

I believe it was me
who agreed in my sleep
to not ever say goodbye
from now till the moment I die
but I believe it was me
who believed and believes
never can anyone die.

I believe it was me,
only me in your dreams,
wishing to one day be real
so you can believe
that all I believe
is because
I believe in you!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-11-06 07:49 PM

OMG, this is such a beauty, Helen.
Such straightforward touching.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2004-11-06 07:52 PM

Thanks, midnitesun. I'm all for straightforward touching but sometimes the distance is too far for my arms so I use my mind.

myheart
Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 160
lost in your eyes

3 posted 2004-11-06 08:13 PM

nice. I especially like the last stanza.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2004-11-06 08:40 PM

Ah, now this was especially nice to read...

jwesley

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-11-06 09:06 PM

beautiful write

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-11-07 04:02 PM

This is a wonderful write Helen..
and I am almost sure in South Africa now it is your birthday!
So....may I add HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

7 posted 2004-11-07 04:50 PM

Beautifully written!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

8 posted 2004-11-07 11:28 PM

Thank you all so much for your gracious replies. Yes, Nancy, you are so right. Another birthday. Thank you for your wishes. May the next 12 months be good for all of us!

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