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just like you |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox 
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run away from all of this escape is nearly enough the time has come for all good men to come to the aid of their country a laugh from my lips of stone resist the fearful winter and he writes his songs from an empty place beautiful but weak [he knows nothing of me] and last night i was told of the weight of my words on worlds that have yet to feel so much and i was told of the love i can't bear to sing aloud and how even when others do the singing for me i shine. [i never wanted to shine] i have always wanted to be just like someone else. and that is why my words hurt and heal you as well. they were written from your heart through my shaky hand. for i have always wanted to be just like you. in the end it's not just you with your memories and your scars, fall on me if you ever forget how beautiful you are. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"[i never wanted to shine] i have always wanted to be just like someone else. and that is why my words hurt and heal you as well. they were written from your heart through my shaky hand. for i have always wanted to be just like you." Wonderful write...I really enjoy your style. Hugs~ |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know, you truly live up to where you are from, "a voice from a musicbox", for the words have such intense meaning but are offered on a cloud. Really enjoyed this one. Example is not the main thing in influencing others, it is the only thing. |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
very, very good. enjoyed. love your pen name too! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
So nice to see your writing again |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Very intense write. Isn't it strange that the ordinary envy the gifted and the extraordinary just want to be normal? Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
**feeling this*** niice.. **babygirL** |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your pen is flowing, Rachael... do everything you can to keep the ink flowing... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rachael~ How artfully you sing~ 'last night i was told of the weight of my words on worlds that have yet to feel so much and i was told of the love i can't bear to sing aloud' This is just melodically lovely~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Now how did I miss this!... more please  into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Now this I truly enjoyed....very well spoken my friend... jwesley |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a touching write |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow..how I understand that one...at least, I understand it the way I understand it... hmm..anyway...much enjoyed the read hugs, g "Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
bump |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I love this...  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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