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To Ice's November
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To Ice's November |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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To Ice’s November Shivering kissed clean Lady trees shake quivering Breeze shuffling skirts All the while their slips showing Pale limbs tremble in winds chill |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
ooh la la what a sexy lady you've made her into i do so like this |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
giggle cute picture with delightful action, guess that means this is a "moving picture"  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 what a flirtatious mother (nature)LOL, a very beautiful write, I'm sure he will love it. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are sure to melt the heart of ice with this one!  Warm hugs to warm Novermber's chill, Linda BTW This is one of my favourite photos of you! You look like a doll! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this portrait of flirty November Karilea. Wonderful images danced in my head as I read. Hugs~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful form and theme! |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Karilea I am honored by the title of this Tanka... It made me blush a little..a tiny bit, or maybe the redness in my cheeks was from being out all day in yesterdays cold, November wind? This poem reminds me of the shag-barked hickories behind my house... Their bark protrudes in sheets , like rough petticoats...or slips And their limbs are pale, a silvery color, that "tremble in winds chill" This poem makes me shiver a bit, as if I were out in the cold and not dressed for chilly weather... And yet I have no mind set to gather up jackets, it seems to urge me to take off what little I have and stand closer to the "lady trees" Peace--------ice/ford ><> |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
very real images...and the feeling of november in the end it's not just you with your memories and your scars, fall on me if you ever forget how beautiful you are. |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
oh, what a wonderful short read! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
short and sweet! a lovely read! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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