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Open Poetry #34

Not Just A Waning Rose

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2004-11-05 11:32 AM

Not Just A Waning Rose
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Leaving the page of my poem
I stroll into the garden of my mind
where the intense heat of honesty flows.
I cannot tell why,
but I lay among the thorns
a torn case of naked truth.
My tongue is broken,
but I’m not just a waning rose of summer.
I can hear the birds and see the sun.
The ocean softly touches the warm sand
I see your sparkling eyes
and that is where my trembling heart is born again.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-11-05 11:55 AM

"I see your sparkling eyes
and that is where my trembling heart is born again."

Welcome home Debra! So good to read you again..
and this is perfectly lovely!
Hugs~

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-11-05 12:38 PM

The ocean softly touches the warm sand
I see your sparkling eyes
and that is where my trembling heart is born again.

You've spoken this with passion
and a fine golden bow

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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